Entertainment For Lively Minds
Stand Out Lines
Posted by RobertC on 10 December 2009 - 6:47pm.
What single great lines or phrases come walloping out of a song for you ? 'the pump don't work 'cause the vandals took the handles','ice blue', 'and I curse Sir Walter Raleigh, he was such a stupid get','shot billiards with a midget till the rain stopped'
'antiques, everyone's a sentiment, an antique'.... or perhaps 'partly fish, partly porpoise, partly baby sperm whale'.
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Betty Boo once sang
"I've used up all my tissues
'cause there's more serious of issues"
In the same song, she managed to make these two lines rhyme:
"You're peepin' through the window,
this is too much for me to handle"
Are you on drugs, man?
The only Betty Boo I am aware of is a mentally disturbed hyperactive cartoon nymphoniac from the 1930s.
It's a great song!
I know you mean well
but I've put 16 shells in my Thirty Ought Six, jammed a chair against the door and I'm waiting for oblivion.
Betty Boo! Doin' the Doo !!
Splendid artwork & overall visual vibe as well - done by the man who went on to be Kaiser George out The Kaisers, and was a featured sideman with Sharleen Spiteri!
It is fab
Weirdly enough, it was produced and co-written by John Coxon (Springheel Jack, Spiritualized)
That missing 'P' makes all the difference
I have revisited Carter USM recently
They were very good with stand-out lines. In fact, entire verses stand out, rather than occasional pithy phrases. A couple from Sheriff Fatman, a song about a landlord who sponges off the welfare state, receiving grants to provide low-quality housing :
"Moving up into second place
behind Nicholas Van Whats-his-face
At six foot six and a hundred tons
The undisputed King of the Slums
More aliases than Klaus Barbie
The Master Butcher of Leigh-on-Sea
In a hatchback from Notre Dame
The one and only Sheriff Fatman"
and
"Fatman's got something to sell
To the capital's homeless
At the Crossroads Motel
For the no-fixed-abodeless
Where you can live life in style
You can sleep in a closet
And if you flash him a smile
He'll take your teeth as a deposit"
As usual etc
And when the clothes are strewn don't be afraid of the room
Touch the fullness of her breast. Feel the love of her caress
She will be your living end
Maybe it's the delivery....
I'm not a huge Springsteen fan, but for some reason - particularly in live recordings - the following lines from Rosalita always hit home with a wallop:
My tyres were slashed and I almost crashed, but the Lord had mercy
My machine she's a dud, I'm stuck in the mud, somewhere in the swamps of Jersey
Ace.
Pet Shop Boys - So Hard
I'm always hoping you'll be faithful
But you're not, I suppose
We've both given up smoking 'cause it's fatal
So whose matches are those?
I've always been killed by that verse, but I couldn't quite say why.
Marvellous
How strange - I've always loved this lyric as well, to the point of actually evangelising about it to non-PSB-loving friends (which probably hasn't helped).
I tried to work out why it seems so perfect. Something to do with the amazing wordplay, maybe ('suppose' and 'those' is a perfect rhyme, but 'faithful' and 'fatal' are more of a pun, and there's an 'almost but not quite' internal rhyme with 'hoping' and 'smoking')...in tandem with the killer twist at the end.
It's like a short story in four lines and I can only assume that Neil Tennant (if he's the sole lyricist) punched the air and did a little dance when he finished it.
My favourites...
So many but two contrasting examples.
I think Rennie Sparks of the Handsome Family might be one of the best lyricists of all time. One of their more widely-known tracks, 'Weightless Again', has someone forgetting how to kiss their lover...and then:
'Like those Indians, lost in the rainforest
Forced to drag burning wood wherever they went
They all had forgotten how to start a fire'
Never heard anything like it - except in the rest of her work.
Secondly, the great RT's 'Walking the Long Miles Home':
'There's no-one around
As I put more ground
Between me and you'.
Much more prosaic but still a clever rhyme for such short lines - and I've always loved that image of needing just to get as far away as possible from someone after a catastrophic row. 'Put more ground' - something methodical and efficient about it. Lovely.
This has been my favourite line ever since...
I was walking down the street in Seattle and I saw this monstrous object on the footpath. I had been staring for a minute or so before I noticed it had these words neatly transcribed on it.
"Money Doesn't Talk It Swears- B Dylan"
'The bugger in the short sleeves...
...fucked my wife, did it quick and split'
Opening line of John Cale's Guts. Rest of the song doesn't quite live up to it.
Although I've always liked the way Betty Boo rhymes 'hamper', 'champers' and 'pamper' in this song
"Never could stand that dog"
Tom Waits
So many Dylan lines just kill me
But if I had to choose one it would be
"Some are mathematicians, some are carpenters' wives, don't know how it all got started, don't know what they do with their lives" (or something like that)