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Is Leonard Cohen's use of the adjective "baffled" the best single-use song word ever?
I know nobody wants to hear anyone's version of that bloody song for a good twelve months but before we put it away on a high shelf where nobody can get at it, let us pay tribute to one of the supreme examples of the single-use songword.
I'm talking about that wonderful line "the baffled king composing Hallelujah". Baffled. *Baffled*? Isn't that beautiful? Baffled indicates something less than bewildered and something more than bemused. And it's musical. And the stress is where it belongs, right on the first syllable. It's perfect for this situation.
I can't believe that Bob Dylan or Smokey Robinson or Randy Newman or any of the other great wordsmiths have got through their entire career without once reaching for that perfect, impeccably apposite adjective. Or is this not its first time out?
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And...
I've just realised that it's a perfect example of an iambic pentameter with a feminine ending. Good writer, isn't he?
Another good writer makes it three:
http://www.bobdylan.com/#/songs?filter0=%20baffled&op0=word
Well remembered ...
And who is the millionaire with the drumsticks in his pants? (Although I always hear it as 'past') Ringo?
When Smokey Sings
Although she may be cute she's just a substitute
'Cos you're the permanent one
Permanent - maybe it's been used elsewhere, but not that often. And not as well.
Similar one-word genius moments
In the Edwyn Collins' single "A Girl Like You" he uses the word "allegorically" for the first and possibly only time in the history of popular music.
Also, Kid Creole's backing singers (the Coconuts) in "Annie I'm Not Your Daddy" seem to repeatedly sing "ono-ono-onomatopoeia", which would have made the song even better.
In "Down Below The Borderline" by Little Feat...
...Lowell George sings "onamatopoetry" which is a first.
More Edwyn, for Orange Juice
"Trite" in I Can't Help Myself
"Frightfully" in Consolation Prize
Can't imagine those used very often.
Stipey
"Team by team reporters baffled, trumped, tethered cropped.
Look at that low playing! Fine, then"
From "Its the End of the World etc etc etc"
What's the verse form here, Lucas?
Now you're asking
Whereas a pentameter contains five feet, or iambs - each consisting of two syllables, one stressed and one unstressed: the BAFFled KING comPOSing HALLeLU(jah)- the first line you quote here seems to have seven, which I guess makes it an iambic septameter. The stress falls upon the first syllable ('team") and then reverts to the te-TUM stresses of team/port/baff/trumped/teth/cropped. The second line follows the same pattern, but using the inherent pauses allowed by having less words in the line, giving punch to the final "fine then".
Blimey
I fear my brain may actually burst.
Any excuse...
...for a bit of Python:
True Faith
Much as I love New Order, Bernard Sumner isn't a lyricist I'd see myself positing alongside Dylan, Cohen and the like. However, the first thing that came to mind was the opening line to True Faith:
"I feel so extraordinary / something's got a hold on me".
In the context of the song, 'extraordinary' is a brilliant choice, and the stresses are absolutely spot on. It might be an example of trochaic tetrameter, but I'm not sure - don't think it's iambic. Not that any of this matters. It's just a great line / verse / song.
'trochaic tetrameter'...
is that some kind of flu remedy?
Hey,
it might be. I'm scared to consult my old textbooks for fear of finding out...
Sumner - the forgotten poet
Those words of Barney's are well-written Nick. Given these, however, I think he must just have struck lucky that day!
"The afternoon was very clear
The sun was beating down on me
I got thirsty for a beer
And I had to go to sea
The sea was very rough
It made me feel sick
But I like that kind of stuff
It beats arithmetic"
(Slow Jam, 2001)
I know, I know, I know...
The odd song aside, they've been releasing absolute shite since 1993's 'Republic' - which was mostly rather shite, too.
Agreed
When they're good they're brilliant; when they're bad they're f***ing awful...
Qualadee lurks
It sounds so Shakespearean, doesn't it - "the baffl'd King".
As for the metre, yes, Cohen gets it dead right throughout the song. Another good example is "It's a cold and it's a broken Hallelujah", where "and it's a" are really just filler syllables to make it scan, but the effect is to separate and isolate the two adjectives as two distinct concepts much more effectively than "a cold, broken Hallelujah" would have.
Even the rhymes are top notch - e.g. "marble arch/vict'ry march".
Thank goodness
Thank goodness Simon Cowell and Alexandra Whatsherface have such a fine understanding of it too.
Indeed
The falling arpeggio on the word "lift" being their shining achievement.
May I recommend
"Book of Longing", the most recent book by LC, which is a mish mash of jottings, doodles, poems and (later used as) lyrics. I bought it for Mrs Path, a complete convert to all things LC since his NEC gig in November, at Christmas. It shows quite what a tortured soul he is, I believe.
More accessible than his early novels. Cohen lite(ish), if you will.
Cohen uses the word 'baffled' in a verse from 'Book of Longing'
WHAT BAFFLED ME (Leonard Cohen, Book of Longing]
I took pills for my memory
but I could not stop it
from erasing
I had a family once
They could walk on water
There was a one-way chain
That held me to a woman's body
She didn't know she jerked me
every-which-way
But who was she?
And who were they?
In the midst of
someone's explanation
I forget
what baffled me
***
I am live-in carer for my Mother who has Alzheimer's, so this poem is especially significant to me - I loved it so much I named my blog about Alzheimer's after it...
http://whatbaffledme.blogspot.com/2009/10/what-baffled-me.html
I also recorded a song called 'Book of Longing', featuring verse from the book...
http://www.reverbnation.com/thecelebratedmrk (if you're into Cohen you might prefer the song 'I Love You So Much My Insides Hurt' at the same address)
Here is one of my own poems, which I posted at jester.me.uk ..
ALL OF MY BEST POEMS [ARE BY LEONARD COHEN]
All of my best poems
are by Leonard Cohen
Except for the one
by William Blake
They wrote them down
because they have poet's fingers
And so that I can get on with the important business
of trying to forget everything I know
A tricky business
this takes up most of my time
My mother is my teacher
I.. I... what was I saying?
All of my best poems
are by Leonard Cohen
He wrote them down
because he has a poet's fingers
Sadly, for the poet,
he forgot to give them back
x
Inexorably and Verisimilitude
David Sylvian uses inexorabaly (its the only time i've heard that used in music) in the track "The Devil's Own".
"The ticking of the clock
Inexorably goes on".
Notable mention of "Verisimilitude" by Teenage Fanclub in the song of that name as well.
Two exquisite examples...
"You're one microscopic cog
In his catastrophic plan
Designed and directed by his red right hand." (Nick Cave)
"Two lovers kissing amongst the screams at midnight,
Two lovers missing the tranquility of solitude." (The Jam)
Key words: microscopic, catastrophic, tranquility, solitude.
Write them in your exercise book.
How can two lovers miss the tranquility of solitude?
If they had the tranquility of solitude they would be alone, which is not what they're after at all, is it?
Perhaps
they're on a break, in separate rooms, or she's gone back to her mother's. Relationships can be like that, or so I'm told.
Slashed seat affairs
Seeing the tabloids the morning after their Prague piss-up, Weller and partner may have been pining for a bit of solitude.
Maybe they think. . .
it's the title of the next James Bond film.
It's also time to appeal to Mr H to put some order in this thread. The use of poncey long Latinate words in lyrics is easy - it's usually called "sixth-form writing" - whereas surely what we're after are examples of the skilful use words like "baffled", which are common enough in conversation but seldom heard in songs.
Two lots of lovers
Those kissing and those missing (solitude) since love is fading (possibly after seeing their affair splashed all over the papers?), compare and contrast - four in all, maybe? That's how I interpret it when I hear that song.
I tend more towards
attributing it to what is known in the trade as the Wonderous Stories Syndrome - songwriters using words that are several sizes too big for them.
Poncey Latinate
I know what you're referring to, Archie, but I don't think this is a good example - because it works.
"Salad Nicoise"
from Yankee Go Home by the outstanding Clap Your Hands Say Yeah. Not sure I have heard 'Nicoise' anywhere else, though doubtless I am wrong.
'She goes downstairs to the kitchen...
...clutching her handkerchief' from She's Leaving Home.
Clutching is so perfect for the line, just the right amoutn of extra detail, and I can't remember anyone else using it. There can't be many who have used handkerchief either...
I know Lennon generally gets the props for lyrics in the Beatles, but I reckon She's Leaving Home matches any of them.
I'll get in here before Lucas ...
Dylan's 'Changing of the Guard' ... "and she's clutching on to his long golden hair".
Not as good as McCartney's use though.
Hail hail Chuck Berry
He doesn't get enough credit for his command of the language. See "Little Queenie" where he sings "If it's a slow song we'll omit it".
*Omit*? Brilliant.
Tom Waits
I've often thought the following lyric contained more than it's share of 'unusual' words - at least 2 in each verse:
Foreign Affair by Tom waits
when travelling abroad in the continental style
it's my belief one must attempt to be discreet
and subsequently bear in mind your transient position
allows you a perspective that's unique
though you'll find your itinerary's a blessing and a curse
your wanderlust won't let you settle down
and you'll wonder how you ever fathomed that you'd be content
to stay within the city limits of a small midwestern town
most vagabonds i knowed don't ever want to find the culprit
that remains the object of their long relentless quest
the obsession's in the chasing and not the apprehending
the pursuit you see and never the arrest
without fear of contradiction bon voyage is always hollered
in conjunction with a handkerchief from shore
by a girl that drives a rambler and furthermore
is overly concerned that she won't see him anymore
planes and trains and boats and buses
characteristically evoke a common attitude of blue
unless you have a suitcase and a ticket and a passport
and the cargo that they're carrying is you
a foreign affair juxtaposed with a stateside
and domestically approved romantic fancy
is mysteriously attractive due to circumstances knowing
it will only be parlayed into a memory
(apologies to m'learned friends for the purloining of copyright material)
Over to Aimee Mann
Aimee Mann is rightly renowned for her articulacy and linguistic precision. She not only used "acquiesce" in a song way before Noel Gallagher made such a fanfare of doing so, but deployed it perfectly:
"It gets so embarassing, so I acquiesce
And I change my mind again - you change your address."
That song, Believed You Were Lucky, also has a great last line: "Life could be fucking great!"
Anyway, the single-use word I really wanted to highlight in today's lecture is "quell" - as in
"It's one of my faults that I can't quell my past
I ought to have gotten it gone."
(4th of July)
In the first line we have the use of the mot juste; in the second, a beautifully chosen, gramatically calamitous construction which works much better than saying it in "proper English" would have done. Full marks.
Obligatory Richard Thompson mention
(Outside of the Inside)
Misericord. That's Misericord. I doubt 'pious' and 'knelt' are wheeled out too often either.
Schools out
Prompted by the letters page darling Archie (2 this issue!), the substitute for knowledge is ignorance.
Sometimes it works:
"Well we got no class
And we got no principles
And we got no innocence
We can't even think of a word that rhymes"/Alice Cooper
Sometimes it doesn't:
"I bought a ticket to the world
But now Ive come back again
Why do I find it hard to write the next line
When I want the truth to be said"/Spandau Ballet
Remind me of the other songs about the "art and angst" of songwritery.......(No EJ, please, he's just taupin' away)
Oy!
I think you'll find that "the ever-reliable letters-page darling" is the conventional style of address.
Oh, God. So, go on, put me out of my misery. What have I gone and said now? (My copy's still in transit.)
Sorry, darling
just jealous....
“Common enough in conversation but seldom heard in songs”
“Common enough in conversation but seldom heard in songs” (to quote Archie’s definition of what counts for this thread).
A lot of pop records deal with the ups and downs of romance, lovers tiffs and all that, but they tend to be pitched at the more histrionic end of the scale, with language to match.
One of the most common phrases that must crop up in these situations is surely “why can’t you be just a little more thoughtful?”
The only song I know of with failure to be sufficiently “thoughtful” on the rap sheet is Mary Love’s Let Me Know. It’s in the second bridge.
Trainee and Dawdle
From Want Ads by the Honey Cone:
Wanted: young man single and free.
Experience in love preferred, but will accept a young trainee.
And from Darling Be Home Soon by The Lovin’ Spoonful:
Darling be home soon,
I couldn’t bear to wait an extra minute if you dawdle.
‘Trainee’ and ‘dawdle’ - have they ever been used anywhere else?
Obligatory Zevon mention
I believe that long time Warren Zevon supporter David Letterman was pretty sure that no one else had used the word "brucellosis" in a song. However, a couple of my favourites pop up in Porcelain Monkey, one of two songs he wrote about Elvis Presley:
Hip-shakin' shoutin' in gold lame
That's how he earned his regal sobriquet
Then he threw it all away
For a porcelain monkey
Left behind by the latest trends
Eating fried chicken with his regicidal friends
That's how the story ends
With a porcelain monkey
'sobriquet' and 'regicidal' being my nominations for this thread.
Undisputed chapmion of the wor(l)d
Fourth day, five day marathon,
We're moving like a parallelogram,
Don't move, I'll shut the door and kill the lights,
If I can't be wrong I must be right
Motorhead / Hawkwind
Cave/Tennant/Dury/Mael
Two memorable Nick Cave-isms, firstly from "Nature Boy":
"I was walking around the flower show like a leper
Coming down with some kind of nervous hysteria
When I saw you standing there, green eyes, black hair
Up against the pink and purple wisteria"
And then from "Abattoir Blues":
"I went to bed last night and my moral code got jammed
I woke up this morning with a frappuccino in my hand"
The sheer nausea with which he pronounces "frappuccino" is worth the admission price alone.
Moving on to Neil Tennant, from PSB's "I Made My Excuses And Left":
"In the crowded court of your love, I was now a supplicant"
Ian Dury's "If I Was With A Woman"
"If I was with a woman she'd have to learn to cherish
The purity and depth of my disdain"
and "What A Waste":
"I could be the teacher in a classroom full of scholars
I could be the sergeant in a squadron full of wallahs...
...I could be a lawyer with stratagems and ruses
I could be a doctor with poultices and bruises"
And finally, Sparks, "Talent Is An Asset":
"Talent is relative, that's hypothetical
We are his relatives, that parenthetical"
My favourite one-off word has always been
From "Cry Me A River" the narrator of the song quotes their lover as saying...
"Told me love was too plebian"
What an arsehole! I'd want him to hurt too.
But its the rhyme of
But its the rhyme of "plebian" with "me and" that is the joy here.
"Told me love was too plebian/told me you were through with me and/ now you say you love me"
Wonderful
Andrew Bird 'Armchairs'
I dreamed you were a cosmonaut
of the space between our chairs
And I was a cartographer
of the tangles in your hair
I sang the song that silence sings
It's the one that everybody knows, everybody knows
The song that silence sings
And this is how it goes
These looms that weave apocrypha
they're hanging from a strand
The dark and empty rooms were full
of incandescent hands
The awkward pause
The fatal flaw
Time, it's a crooked bow
Time is a crooked bow
In time you need to learn, to love
The ebb just like the flow
Grab hold of your bootstraps, and pull like hell
until gravity feels sorry for you, and lets you go
As if you lack the proper chemicals to know
the way it felt the last time you let yourself fall this low
Time's a crooked bow
Time's a crooked bow
Time, it's a crooked bow
Fifty-five and three-eighths years later
At the bottom of a gigantic crater
An armchair calls to you
Yeah, and armchair calls to you
It says, someday, we'll get back at them all
With epoxy and a pair of pliers
As ancient sea slugs begin to crawl
through the ragweed and barbed wire
You didn't write
You didn't call
It didn't cross your mind at all
Through the waves
waves of hay and straw
You couldn't feel a thing at all
Fifty-five and three-eighths
Time
Fifty-five and three-eighths
Time
Time
Paul simon is apt to be confused
From memory..
Something So right:
When somethings so right
It's likely to lose me
It's apt to confuse me
Because it's such an unusual sight
Oh no I can't get used to something so right
simple word pivotal in the lyrics - just wouldn't have been anywhere near as good with anything else
The kitchen has been
The kitchen has been ransacked
ski trails in the hall
a chicken has been dhansacked
and thrown against the wall
John Cooper Clarke - The Day My Pad Went Mad
A Song for the Lawyers?
I'm surprised no-one's nominated this:
I play along with the charade,
there doesn't seem to be
a reason to change
You know, I feel so dirty
when they start talking cute
I wanna tell her that I love her,
but the point is probably moot
"Jessie's Girl" Rick Springfield
(I always thought the "baffled king" was the "barefoot king")
Dang it, you're right
It's been bugging me ever since Heppo put it up. Just didn't sound right and your prompt has reawakened my heard word. And it scans and seems better, also giving a more rounded metaphorical image. I wonder whether it actually is........
I will now apologise for dissing you over the way!
Funnily enough
I misheard it as Battle King for a long time. Y'know, he's been fighting Goliath, he needs to de-stress by making music...
Funny how the mind fills in the gaps.
More Ms Mann
I'm very much in agreement with the comment lauding Aimee Mann's lyrics. Consider the following (from 'Ghost World') which not only features the only - in my knowledge - use of the word 'gibbous' in popular song, but rather beautifully captures a mood :
12th of June, a gibbous moon
was this the longest day?
I'll walk down to the bay
and jump off of the dock and watch
the summer waste away.
This one embiggens me
From The Hollies "He ain't heavy, he's my brother" -
"He would not encumber me..He ain't heavy etc"
I don't think even Len has used encumber.
Unless others know better.....
back tp Leonard
Never forget that Cohen is first and foremost a poet and writer. The music was almost an afterthought to his published work.
I'm overjoyed with all the cash he's making on this after getting his retirement funds ripped off by his accountant several years ago.
He's in his 70s and I'd still do him....even if he says: " I ache in all the places I used to play."
In The Jungle Of The Senses
I'd be pretty amazed if anyone other than Shriekback (in "NEMESIS") have managed to work "parthenogenesis" into a song.
HalfMan HalfBiscuit
There are plenty of unusual words from Nigel Blackwell, I particularly like conglomorate and peripheral both in "We made this village from a trad.arr tune." but almost any song will contain at least one.
Partho, partheno...that word he said
Not in a lyric maybe, but Parthenogenesis is the title of a 20 minute aglommeration on Canned Heat's Living the Blues from 1968
It's not often you hear the word
undinal these days, as in "undinal songs urge the sailors on, til lured by the siren's cry" from "Firth of Fifth", a Tony Banks tune.
He later trumped that by using "bread bin", another much neglected tool in the songwriter's box of spanners, in "All In A Mouse's Night", before tossing aside the latest Argos catalogue and going back to Brewer's Dictionary of Phrase & Fable.