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Great Lines in Songs..

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Great lines from songs,example "you've been telling me your a genius since you were seventeen and all the time Ive known you I still don't know what you mean" Steely Dan Reelin In The Years or "In fourteen months ive only smiled once and I didn't do it consciously " Dylan - Up To Me, over to you guys..

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A lot is in the performance

Many of my favourite lines, when typed out don't seem that great, but when you hear them sung, they become something else entirely. For instance Rosanne Cash, in The Wheel sings:

I'm not looking for your answers
Oh darlin', don't you see
That just to know the question
Is good enough for me

On the page it's not great poetry, but when she sings it, a shiver runs down my spine.

Similarly Mary Chapin Carpenter in Outside Looking In:

Tonight I drove around and the street came up before me
I took a turn and then I found this old house come toward me
I heard the sound a heart must make when a memory's caving in
Oh baby what a hungry place, outside looking in

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Carl Parker | 13 April 2009 - 5:17pm

RUN DMC - King of Rock

Every jam we play
We break two needles
There's three of us
But we're not the Beatles

I think it's the use of the word "but"...

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KDH | 13 April 2009 - 5:32pm

and in tribute to King Of Rock

the Beastie Boys:

I'm the king of Boggle, there is none higher
I get eleven points for the word "quagmire".

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Joe Muggs | 13 April 2009 - 8:59pm

One of those living room moments from Beth Orton

You walked into my house last night,
I couldn't help but notice
A light that was long gone still burning strong
You were sitting, your fingers like fuses,
Your eyes were cinnamon...

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Glenbervie | 13 April 2009 - 5:58pm

Billy Bragg

"How can you lie there and think of England when you don't even know who's in the team?"

and

"I never made the first team, I just made the first team laugh"

Also - the complete works of Half Man Half Biscuit.

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Paul Waring | 13 April 2009 - 6:32pm

"Italian Girls" by Rod Stewart

She was tall, thin and tarty
And she drove a Maserati
Faster than sound -
I was heaven bound...

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Mark JF | 13 April 2009 - 6:39pm

"Life's Been Good" by Joe Walsh

My Maserati does one eighty five
I lost my licence, so now I don't drive

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Mark JF | 13 April 2009 - 6:41pm

Mmmm... 'Up To Me'...

one of my all time favourite songs and featuring what is quite possibly my favourite lyric of all -

We heard the Sermon on the Mount and I knew it was too complex
It didn't amount to anything more than what the broken glass reflects

Brilliant.

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Patrick Crowther | 13 April 2009 - 6:58pm

Finest lines ever about pemature ejaculation?

Were your arms and legs wrapped round more than my memory tonight?
When the bell rang out and the air turned blue from fright
But in shameless moments you made more of me than just a mess
And a handful of eagerness says 'what do you suggest?'

I'll wear it proudly - Elvis Costello

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Steve Turner | 13 April 2009 - 7:04pm

Billy again

"She said no amount of poetry could mend a broken heart
But you can put the hoover round if you want to make a start"

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Captain Underpants | 13 April 2009 - 7:05pm

Zimmerman again...

She was standing there in back of my chair
Said to me, "Don't I know your name?"
I muttered somethin' underneath my breath,
She studied the lines on my face.
I must admit I felt a little uneasy
When she bent down to tie the laces of my shoe,
Tangled up in blue

The Master..

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Gorbalsbhoy | 13 April 2009 - 8:09pm

You mean you don't wince ...

...at those last two lines?

"Hmm..what rhymes with 'Blue' - 'when she nipped off to the loo'? 'She joined a pirate's crew'?. Ah I know! - Shoe!"

Still 10/10 for the delivery and internal rhymes.

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nicktf | 13 April 2009 - 10:16pm

Maybe it's just me

but I think those lines have more intrigue, more potential for varying interpretation, and hence more depth than the entire output of some writers.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 14 April 2009 - 1:35pm

Look

I don't want to mix it with The 12 Tribes of The Zim, but not sure why "more potential for varying interpretation.." is, in and of itself, an implication of "depth". Or indeed, necessarily, a good thing.

Surely, precision - the ability to articulate an emotion, however ephemeral, in an apt, exact way - is an equal, perhaps more laudable, skill?

My contention is that if they chose to, Hal David, Jimmy Webb* or Macca, say, could write a song in the style of Dylan - diplomats, hanging judges, siamese cats - the works. However, could Dylan write "Maybe I'm Amazed" or "Walk on By" or "Where's the Playground, Susie?" ...?

*Jimmy Webb did of course - Macarthur Park.

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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 3:07pm

Hear hear!

I love a bit of Bob as much as the next man, but he does get cut an awful lot of lyrical slack.

Wiggle wiggle wiggle like a ton of lead
Wiggle you can raise the dead.

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nicktf | 14 April 2009 - 5:03pm

Cutting slack

over a few wiggles is not allowed in my book. It's lazy shite, Bob or not.

However, I can't personally accept any dissing of any song from Blood On The Tracks. No exceptions. People have been removed from my Christmas card list for less.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 14 April 2009 - 6:51pm

Horses for courses.

Bob don't swing, by and large. So Walk On By is out of the question. But the tin pan alley giants don't do weather men, Mozambique or unlucky ponys called Lucifer.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 14 April 2009 - 6:55pm

I love BOTT

and BOB and H61R. But can't help the feeling that our Bobby sometimes - ee 'ow you say take da pees no?

Talking of horses - how about Wild Horses? How come MicknKeef never get much of a nod or a wink in the old songwriter stakes?

They are some of the best scene setters in the business

Gold Coast slave ship bound for cotton fields

Met a gin-soaked bar room queen in Memphis

Please allow me to introduce myself, I'm a man of wealth and taste.

And a personal favourite, the oft forgotten Sway

Did you ever wake up to find a day that broke up your mind?
Destroyed your notion of circular time

And later, this great line

A girl that broke me up with a corner of her smile

Precision. Or what TS Eliot described as the Objective Correlative - the point at which words, cadence,imagery are yoked together intensely in a hermetic simulacrum dramatis to re-create a specific yet essentially momentary emotion.

Off to watch the footie on the big screen at Pseud's Corner now with Emily Dickinson and Gerard Manley Hopkins. Few lagers, maybe a curry and - hopefully a punch-up with those Late Augustan tossers

Later yeah?

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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 8:20pm

Mick Jagger was a *brilliant* lyricist...

I couldn't agree more. Which makes abominations such as Dogshit In The Doorway (© Keith Richards) all the more depressing.

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Patrick Crowther | 16 April 2009 - 6:35pm

It's tempting ...

... to fill it with Bob Dylan, with five off the top of my head, and I'm *sure* I'm missing some of my favourites:

She could be respectably married
Or running a whorehouse in Buenos Aires

To live outside the law
You must be honest

Your debutante just knows what you need
But I know what you want

The ghost of electricity
Howls in the bones of her face

Even the swap meets around here
Are getting pretty corrupt

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epigone | 13 April 2009 - 8:56pm

sometimes

I think that the Beatles or Stones question should be replaced by Dylan: Yes or No

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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 9:14am

And what of...

Jefferson Airplane's "Wooden Ships"...

"You must try some of my purple berries
I've been eating them for six or seven weeks now
Haven't got sick once"

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Anselm | 13 April 2009 - 9:00pm

The House Of Love

Guy Chadwick is a greatly under-rated writer I think, and his words can both sound great as music and pack emotional punch too.

This from the b-side "Secrets" does exactly that:

If you blab your mouth when you're drugged or you're drunk
Scream in your sleep and then wake then you weep...

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Joe Muggs | 13 April 2009 - 10:50pm

Maria McKee has the memorable

She don't sweat, she sours and melts
like ice-cream in the heat

from Panic Beach. Actually for a number about the decay of vaudeville the intro is pretty good too.

Well the dog act got drunk again last night
And the king and queen of the waltz clog team
Had another fight
King was careless with his tango grip
Nearly lost his queen in a dip
Yeah she righted herself, straightened out her slip
And kicked him in the shin

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nicktf | 13 April 2009 - 10:20pm

50 Cent - 21 Questions

'I love you like a fat kid loves cake.'

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TIAL | 14 April 2009 - 12:18am

Bet she loved that...

whoever she is.

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Patrick Crowther | 14 April 2009 - 6:49am

No

I didn't

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Black Type | 14 April 2009 - 4:27pm

I guess I should have known

By the way you parked your car sideways
That it wouldn't last

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SirTerence | 14 April 2009 - 12:45am

On a Prince tip

"What's the use of being young/If you ain't gonna be old?" (Gold)

"In france a skinny man/Died of a big disease with a little name
By chance his girlfriend came across a needle/And soon she did the same" (SOTT)

"Am I black or white/Am I straight or gay?" (Controversy)

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Black Type | 14 April 2009 - 4:35pm

Joni gives Graham Nash a slap

..you said "I am as constant as the Northern Star"
I said "Constantly in darkness, where's that at?,
If you want me I'll be in the bar"

from A Case Of You, as if you needed telling!

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Obdewlla | 14 April 2009 - 1:41am

Jake Thackray has a spot of bother with a talkative wife

On Again, On Again

....She also talks without stopping to me in our bed of a night
Throughout the sweetest of our intimate delights
She never gives over
Not even stopping while we go hammer and tongs towards the peak
Except maybe for a sigh and a groan and one perfunctory shriek
Then she goes on again, on again, on again on and I must
Assume she's never noticed that she's just been interrupted
Totally unruffled she is, and as far as I can see
I might just as well have been posting a letter or stirring up the tea

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Graham Johns | 14 April 2009 - 7:44am

The interplay of words is well nigh unbeatable

"If We Should Meet In Glasgow,
by Chance On A Rainy Day,
let's Sit And Drink In A Damn Good Bar,
till Evening Comes Out To Play."
I love the idea of the chance ofa rainy day meeting.
It's by Jackie Leven. It's the opening stanza from Single Father.

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Retropath2 | 14 April 2009 - 8:15am

Is the above clip

from a show called Crimes of Fashion or something? Jeez. The host is clearly on a single handed mission to disprove the theory that all Italians are innately stylish.

But if it' s a well turned phrase you're looking for - how about Smokey Robinson?

There you were, beautiful. The promise of love was written on your face. You led me on with untrue kisses and held me captive in your false embrace

You can write it as prose. You can steal it for the opening of a goodbye letter. You can see it here:


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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 12:49pm

Pretty much everything by Belle and Sebastien

But especially 'The State I am in':

'and so I gave myself to God,
There was a pregnant pause before he said OK'

or

'My brother had confessed that he was gay
It took the heat off me for a while'

Of course you could almost pick anything by Dylan, including when he is talking nonsense, purely on the strength of the delivery

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Batman2504 | 14 April 2009 - 9:49am

Dylan doesnt have to try

The hanging judge was sober, he hadn't had a drink
(Lily Rosemary)

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Jayhawk | 14 April 2009 - 9:57am

And he's still doing it

High Water

"Don't reach out for me," she said
"Can't you see I'm drownin' too?"

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Steven C | 14 April 2009 - 10:51am

Lily, Rosemary etc

Sounds good when he sings it but second part is superfluous, and something of a tautology, is it not?

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Sven Garlic | 14 April 2009 - 12:12pm

I see it ...

... as clarification that 'sober' does not mean 'unintoxicated' but has another sense: grave and sedate, perhaps, as my thorough research on Google just now suggests.

I also see it as an example of Bob Dylan's playful way with language.

Of course, if he said black when he should have said white, I'd justify that too, so you can't trust me.

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epigone | 14 April 2009 - 11:33pm

Tool

"Is this what you wanted?", pause for three short repetitive metal guitar chords, "Because this is what you're getting" - Ticks and Leeches by Tool

Sung with such venom and anger. It makes an impression.

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LOUDspeaker | 14 April 2009 - 11:45am

Summed up nicely

Iggy's 'Some Weird Sin' - 'When things get too straight / I can't bear it/ I feel stuck / Stuck on a pin'

Who hasn't felt like that at some time?

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kcgrady | 14 April 2009 - 12:16pm

So simple....

...that is sounds daft, yet when sung, it sounds just so right, as if, why has nobody thought that before....
"You come home late and you come home early
You come on big when you're feeling small
You come home straight and you come home curly
Sometimes you don't come home at all

Chorus:
So what in the world's come over you
And what in heaven's name have you done
You've broken the speed of the sound of loneliness
You're out there running just to be on the run"


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Retropath2 | 14 April 2009 - 12:34pm

Oh dear ...

you have stumbled upon my nomination for the worst line ever set down on paper. I've heard Mr Prine sing it, and Nanci Griffith sing it, and it shows up in the repetoire of every amateur folk pub singer, and it's held up as a great example of the songwriting craft but I still can't get past ...

"You come home straight and you come home curly"

- it's a rhyme in search of a meaning. Why not go with "gurly" (transvestite), "burly" (back from the gym), "pearly" (bedecked like an Eastend caricature), "swirly" (on acid), or even "rarely" (if sung in a Northern Irish accent).

And how fast is 'the speed of the sound of loneliness' anyway?

(Sorry ... nothing personal ... I'm off for a lie down now).

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Steven C | 14 April 2009 - 1:41pm

Oh Dear. The meaning is plain.

Some days you come home with straight hair, the next you've changed your mind again and it's curly.

Methinks you need that lie down.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 14 April 2009 - 2:01pm

Alabama 3

...would seem to be of the same opinion. They dropped curly from their version and substitued f***ed up.

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Seamus | 14 April 2009 - 5:33pm

That is actually the word I was essentially focussing on.

I think it it makes the song. With a different mood it would appear trite or just plain nonsense, but sung with the melancholia the song deserves, it suddenly, to me at least, becomes so obvious that I wonder why it isn't the usual use of the word.
And John Prine is someone more than capable of giving an excruciatingly awful line in his time, but I just love it.

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Retropath2 | 15 April 2009 - 3:30pm

Back in the day in madrid

when we covered that song Jason, our fine singer changed it ti 'You come home straight, you come home fucked up,' If memory serves, it used to really work...
Shit! just read the a3 comment! NOW I know where he got it!!!!!

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Vorgongod | 21 April 2009 - 8:48pm

JP is a Zen master of beautiful simplicity.

Oh, the glory of true love
Is a wild and precious thing
It don't grow on old magnolias
Or only blossom in the spring
No, the glory of true love
Is it will last your whole life through
Never will go out of fashion
Always will look good on you

You can climb the highest mountain
Touch the moon and stars above
But Old Faithful's just a fountain
Compared to the glory of true love

Best heard at the wheel of a convertible swooshing down Highway 1 somewhere south of Monterey. I can recommend the experience most highly.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 14 April 2009 - 2:03pm

One of my favourites

Ryan Adams: Carolina Rain

One night at the diner over eggs, over easy she showed me the length of her legs.

Fantastic!

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Fear Manach | 14 April 2009 - 4:51pm

mad bad Ryan

Come pick me up. Take me out. Fuck me up. Steal my records. Screw all my friends. They're all full of shit.
With a smile on your face. And then do it again

If that's not a love song, I don't know what is

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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 11:02pm

Could just be

a personality disorder

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Molesworth | 14 April 2009 - 11:03pm

Geoff Mann - Twelfth Night

Some early 80s prog, from the "Fact & Ficton" album, the song "Human Being":

If every time we tell a lie, a little fairy dies
They must be building death camps in the garden

Always makes me laugh...

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Molesworth | 14 April 2009 - 8:31pm

Alive with the glory of love

'When I see you, I wanna do you...

right where you're standing.'

- Say Anything, from the album 'Is a Real Boy.'

I think these are all great song lines... but not so great when typed. Eeek. A 'you had to be there' moment.

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fastforward | 14 April 2009 - 8:32pm

Mr Waits for me

"If you exorcise my devils, then my angels may leave too. When they leave, they are so hard to find"

or

"He gave her a dimestore watch
And a ring made from a spoon
Everyone is looking for someone to blame
But you share my bed, you share my name
Well, go ahead and call the cops
You dont meet nice girls in coffee shops
She said baby, I still love you
Sometimes theres nothin left to do
Oh you go to
Hold on, hold on
You got to hold on
Take my hand, Im standing right here
You got to hold on"

Etc. Etc. Etc.

Genius is an overused word but...

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waldorf | 14 April 2009 - 9:00pm

Perfection in miniature

Somewhere Down The Crazy River, Robbie Robertson. Just a beautiful short story. So perfect you can't isolate a single line because each builds on the last.

That said, "Take a picture of this" sends a shiver down the spine every time I hear it. Doesnt look so great written down...

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Molesworth | 14 April 2009 - 9:10pm

Seconded

Words & music by Robbie, evoking imagery from the Coen brothers in a landscape frequented by Doctor John's cronies and voodoo drinking buddies. You can see the moon glinting on a sheen of sweat from a hot bayou night, feel the tug of a damp shirt on your back, and hear the crawling and chirping things in the bushes. Catch the Blue train, all the way to Kokomo. Utterly superb.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 15 April 2009 - 1:17pm

Evocative..

I agree with above..
The fields are empty, abandoned '59 Chevy
Laying in the back seat listening to Little Willie John

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Gorbalsbhoy | 14 April 2009 - 9:16pm

Talking of Little Willie John.

If I don't love you baby, grits ain't groceries, eggs ain't poultry and Mona Lisa was a man...(written by Titus Turner)


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Sheev | 15 April 2009 - 1:24pm

yes, genius!

also brilliantly covered by the Fleshtones

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el hombre malo | 16 April 2009 - 9:38pm

Telling it like it is

Bob can hit the nail on the head in devastating fashion (as well as be mysteriously and evocatively ambiguous):

Maggie's Farm

Well, I try my best
To be just like I am,
But everybody wants you
To be just like them.

Positively 4th Street

You got a lotta nerve
To say you got a helping hand to lend
You just want to be on
The side that's winning

Yes, I wish that for just one time
You could stand inside my shoes
You'd know what a drag it is
To see you

Going back to Iggy - also telling it like it is in original style of his own:

Sixteen

Go out to the funky bar
I get hurt, crying inside
cause everybody's so fine
And they don't need me.

Gimme Danger

there's nothing in my dreams
but some ugly memories
kiss me like the ocean breeze

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Sven Garlic | 14 April 2009 - 9:50pm

cars.girls

But I remember us riding in my brother's car - her body tanned and wet down at the reservoir.

The screen door slams, Mary's dress waves

One soft infested summer, me and Terry became friends

I'm driving a stolen car, out on Eldridge Avenue

I got a sixty-nine Chevy with a 396, Fuelie heads and a Hurst on the floor. She's waiting tonight down in the parking lot outside the Seven-Eleven store

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Sheev | 14 April 2009 - 11:26pm

I'm driving a stolen car, out on Eldridge Avenue ..

great live version

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Gorbalsbhoy | 15 April 2009 - 12:04am

By George

"I was so young when I was born" from Crackerbox Palace.

It somehow makes perfect sense that he financed Life Of Brian.

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Ola Claesson | 15 April 2009 - 12:51am

Just Another Pleasant Valley Sunday

Creature comfort goals
They only numb my soul and make it hard for me to see
My thoughts all seem to stray, to places far away
I need a change of scenery

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Glenbervie | 15 April 2009 - 1:28am

In the end it took me a dictionary...

... to find out the meaning of unrequited... W Bragg Esq

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Glenbervie | 15 April 2009 - 1:39am

Elvis lives

I used to think my dad was Elvis
But I haven't told him that yet.
I haven't told my dad, either.

From Belle and Sebastian's A Century of Elvis, a seemingly throwaway re-jig of their lovely A Century of Fakers, with the original vocal replaced by a completely different spoken recitation, in a brogue thick enough to slice, about a series of utterly banal Elvis sightings in a Scottish town. I say "seemingly" throwaway because it does end up attaining a genius of its own.

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Ian McGillis | 15 April 2009 - 2:58am

Greatest hip-hop simile...ever?

I never thought it could happen, this rappin' stuff
I was too used to packin' gats and stuff
Now honeys play me close like butter play toast

Juicy, The Notorious B.I.G. If Biggie wasn't a poet, then we need to redefine the word.

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Ian McGillis | 15 April 2009 - 3:09am

re. Biggie: oops...

Forgot to include the final rhyme:

"From the Mississippi down to the east coast"

Somehow the shaky geography (DOWN to the east coast? really?) just adds to the greatness of it. A bit like Run-DMC apparently thinking the Beatles were a trio.

A tidbit too good not to add: legend has it that when Run-DMC first met Aerosmith, one of them excitedly told a friend that was hanging with "My homies, Toys In The Attic." If it's not true, let's just pretend it is, OK?

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Ian McGillis | 15 April 2009 - 3:17am

Roger

I've always loved the opening lines of Pink Floyd's "The Final Cut".....

Through the fish-eyed lens of tear stained eyes.
I can barely define the shape of this moment in time

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chrisf | 15 April 2009 - 6:00am

Boz

Shelley needed a whole sonnet, Boz Scaggs takes just two lines-

'There's a pile of bone out on the desert floor
All that's left of El Conquistador....'

and later-

'That old soul stirrer slamming through the night
Tombstone train cuts it's own daylight'

Great evocative writing from King of El Paso, off Dig, one of the great mislaid albums of recent years.

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spodify | 15 April 2009 - 8:13am

If you like Dig

you have to check out Some Change. It's brilliant.

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Vulpes Vulpes | 15 April 2009 - 1:35pm

Beth Nielsen Chapman

How heavy the empty heart, how light the heart that's full

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Bigsby | 15 April 2009 - 12:21pm

er, Sheryl Crow

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got

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Bigsby | 15 April 2009 - 12:22pm

Desire As

A sylph-figured creature that changes her mind

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Sheev | 15 April 2009 - 1:43pm

Some disco

Odyssey - Native New Yorker

Love is just a passing word
It's a thought you had in a taxi cab
That got left on the kerb
When he dropped you off at East 83rd

and

Where did all those yesterdays go?
When you still believed
Love could really be like a Broadway show
You were the star
When did it close?

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Graham Johns | 15 April 2009 - 1:59pm

Trashcans - Mmasters of the punning linguist arts

you came into my life
like a brick through a window
and i
cracked a smile

'the best man's fall'

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Donald McTroosers | 15 April 2009 - 3:13pm

Paul Heaton - Flag Day

"It's a waste of time if you know what I mean
Try shaking your box in front of the Queen
Cos her purse is fat and it's bursting at the seams
It's a waste of time if you know what I mean."

Idealistic, simplistic, even immature. But brilliant.

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waldorf | 15 April 2009 - 7:43pm

squeezing one out


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Sheev | 16 April 2009 - 1:18am

More squeeze please

This morning at 4.50 I took her rather nifty down to an incubator where 30 minutes later she gave birth to a daughter within a year a walker, she looked just like her mother if there could be another.

and

The devil came and took me from Bar to street to Bookie

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Fear Manach | 16 April 2009 - 6:31pm

tempted to add

I bought a toothbrush, some toothpaste, a flannel for my face
Pyjamas, a hairbrush, new shoes and a case
I said to my reflection "lets get out of this place"
Past the church and the steeple - the laundry on the hill
Billboards and the buildings
Memories of it still - keep calling and calling
But forget it all - I know I will

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Sheev | 16 April 2009 - 6:47pm

Thank You

There was a thread once which involved lyrics being a bit wrong and I was frustrated because I knew that there was a glaringly obvious Squeeze one. And it is that very line from Up The Junction. I mean, who goes to an "incubator" when a baby is due?

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Austin | 18 April 2009 - 9:41pm

'The good people of the world

are washing their cars on their lunch breaks
hosing and scrubbing as best they can
in skirts and suits'

Leaving Las Vegas - Sheryl Crow

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Danni | 16 April 2009 - 4:54pm

Lux & Ivy

"I was a teenage werewolf, braces on my fangs" - from Teenage Werewolf.

"I saw Elvis with your mother, on the Drug Train" - Drug Train

"You put one foot up, you put another foot up, you put another foot up and you're on board - the Drug Train!" - Drug Train

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el hombre malo | 16 April 2009 - 8:20pm

The man from Del Amitri

If I ever loved you, shouldn't I be crying?
Shouldn't I be cracking up, and drinking all the time?
If I ever loved you, how come I feel alright?
How come the nights are so easy, and the mornings look so bright?

'If I ever loved you'. One of many gems from the criminally underrated Justin Currie, IMHO. The kind of thing that would be far more lauded if it came from the pen of such elder statesmen as Nick Lowe or even Chris Difford.

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DougieJ | 16 April 2009 - 9:14pm

Justin

Justin & some pals were in a bar in Glasgow a couple of years back, at a Karaoke night. He stepped up, and asked to sing "Nothing Ever Happens", but there was a problem with the machine displaying the lyrics. He was a trooper, and was keen to carry on. "It's ok, I know the words", he said. To which the lady running the show said "aye, son, they all say that." "BUT I WROTE IT!"....

He sang.

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el hombre malo | 16 April 2009 - 9:58pm

Voice

His speaking voice is quite surprising don't you think? Very polite in that genteel West End of Glasgow manner. Watched a couple of his promo videos on YouSpace or MyTube around the launch of his solo album. Great simple performances in his flat (sandstone tenement, natch)!

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DougieJ | 16 April 2009 - 10:02pm

What I think she sees

I love this:

Baby claims I kiss like I really care
Well, I guess I'd say I don't but the truth ain't fair
And sometimes she looks at me and says
'Babe, my heart just stalled',
But what I think she sees ain't me at all.

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Captain Underpants | 17 April 2009 - 9:13am

Be my Downfall...

"be my undoing, be my slow road to ruin, tonight"

or "...she ain't comin' back,
the buttons on my clothes
are as plain to see as that"

I like the above because of the reversal of the expected form of words i.e. not 'that's as plain as the buttons on my clothes', but 'the buttons on my clothes are as plain to see as that'.

Sometimes the simple order of words in a song is pleasing in itself.

It's interesting how certain bands fall out of favour for no apparent reason. I maintain that much of their output (Del Amitri and Justin Currie solo) stands comparison, musically and lyrically, with any 'Americana' released in the last decade or so.

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DougieJ | 19 April 2009 - 1:58am

Great live...

...too.

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nicktf | 19 April 2009 - 4:26am

Lieber & Stoller

"Don't you give me no dirty looks,
Your father's hip he know what cooks,
Just tell your hoodlum friends outside -
You ain't got time to take a ride"
(Yakety-Yak)

"Did you ever hear a tenor sax,
swinging like a rusty axe,
honking like a frog
down in a hollow log,
baby that is rock & roll"
(That Is Rock & Roll)

I'd pick the Coasters versions, but the Supersuckers do a cracking version of "That Is Rock & Roll" too.

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el hombre malo | 16 April 2009 - 9:51pm

Massive Attack...

Protection:

"You say the magic's gone, well I'm not a magician.
You say the spark's gone, well get an electrician."

Typing this just proves the point that the music changes everything. Those words are clever but when I see them in black and white it could almost as easily suit Half Man Half Biscuit as Tracy Thorn's world-weary melancholia.

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DougieJ | 16 April 2009 - 11:01pm

Correction

Better Things, not Protection.

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DougieJ | 16 April 2009 - 11:03pm

Hazeldine

are a three girl combo from Albequerque (spelt correctly?), big in Germany apparently. From The song Tarmac.... "Hold me tight, kiss me now, and fuck me like Batman".
Now is that something, or do I need help?

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geacher53 | 17 April 2009 - 8:36pm

Two more

Jenny Lewis - Rise up with fists

Are you really that pure, Sir?
Thought I saw you in Vegas
It was not pretty, but she was
But she will wake up wealthy
And you will wake up 45

And that man McAloon again...

Should a love be tender, and bleed out loud?
Or be tougher than tough, and prouder than proud.
If I'm troubled by every folding of your skirt,
am I guilty of every male inflicted hurt?
But I don't know how to describe the Modern Rose,
When I can't refer to her shape against her clothes.
With the fever of purple prose.

Cruel - Prefab Sprout

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russell123 | 18 April 2009 - 8:13pm

McLoon

"If you take, then put back good
If you steal, be Robin Hood"

perfect

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stevev | 20 April 2009 - 2:09pm

some more B&S

As said above pretty much any belle and Sebastian, but how about

You know a girl who's tax free on her back and making
Plenty cash; While you are working for the joy of giving (Lazy Line)

or

Is he your husband?
Or just your boyfriend?
Is he the moron who's been beating you and keeping you inside?
I've never done this kind of thing
But if I kill him now, who's going to miss him?
I went up to the school
I went up Castlehill
For every step there is a local boy who wants to be a hero
Do you want to do it now?
Outside the butchers with a knife and a bike chain
(from I Could be Deaming - who mentioned twee!)

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grahamt | 18 April 2009 - 8:52pm

I shot a man in Reno just to

I shot a man in Reno just to watch him die.

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nchristie | 18 April 2009 - 9:04pm

Good old

Phil Spector

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Molesworth | 18 April 2009 - 9:11pm

Bruuuuce!

I always admired the opening lines of Tunnel of Love. Using very simple language Springsteen paints a complete picture in very few words, it's worthy of Chuck Berry and there is no higher praise than that.

Fat man sitting on a little stool
Takes the money from my hand while his eyes take a walk all over you.
Hands me a ticket, smiles, and whispers "Good luck"

Not a syllable is wasted, that's great writing.

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Cookieboy | 19 April 2009 - 9:20am

Also.....

I love the following from the same song.....

"Then the lights go out and its just the three of us
You me and all that stuff were so scared of".

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Steve Hill | 19 April 2009 - 7:59pm

oh yeah

Springsteen is underrated as a lyricist. The simplicity is beautiful once you get into it. I wrote my master thesis on his lyrics a couple of years ago and my respect grew immensely throughout the experience. Can´t think of anyone contemporary who writes about America as sharp as him.

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Ola Claesson | 19 April 2009 - 8:05pm

Hungy Heart

Got a wife and kids in Baltamore, Jack,
I went out for a ride and I never went back...

What more do you need to know? Perfect.

My long time favourite though is Bobbie D - "the cops don't need you, and man they expect the same".

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paulwright | 20 April 2009 - 12:24pm

By chance copped some Dylan covers over lunch

Yet more versions of "You ain't going nowhere" and hearing it twice in quick succession reminded what utter nonsense it is:"Oo-ee! Ride me high
Tomorrow's the day
My bride's gonna come
Oh no, are we gonna fly
Down in the easy chair!"
Aren't we just...
Mind you, the lyrics thru'out Basemant Tapes are a bit outre.

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Retropath2 | 20 April 2009 - 2:13pm
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